Bill Murray: The Game Buggy, slow, large, AND boring.
I'm not convinced that you tested this at all. If you die, the game does not reset itself properly. The swf file is humongous and for some unfathomable reason the game suffers massive graphical slowdown. The timer scrolls off as you walk. To describe the graphics as uninspired is to be generous.
And all this for what, if it were not buggy, would still be a very boring game.
First come up with a game idea that is somehow interesting; some technical mistakes can be forgiven if a game is fundamentally cool. Once you have that down, learn some standard techniques for making sure your flash is a reasonable size and runs at a reasonable rate.
